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Dark are his eyes
When they fill up with tears
Silent sorrow
Nobody hears

Stars are like diamonds
Sun made of gold
The moon’s casting opals
The magic unfolds

The shadows consume
And people decay
Rest in a casket
Die where the lay

Crystal-like tears
Pour from his eyes
Which I gaze upon
They’re spreading no lies

He’s crying an ocean
I’m healing his pain
Singing salvation
Tears splatter like rain
©2006-2009 ~SuneluvsBeastie
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Woot. I have revised this so many times, and I finally have it where I want it!

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:iconprince-goth:
Nice poem.I like it

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Whoever said "life is easy" definantly didn't have a life
:iconsuneluvsbeastie:
Cool, happy that you do.

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Tell her you're searching for her soul. :3
:iconlastkhaosangel:
nice poem though

Die where the lay isnt the supsoed ot eb they?

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"A good artist copies, but a great artist steals..."
:iconsuneluvsbeastie:
shut up, I....knew that hahahaha

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Tell her you're searching for her soul. :3
:iconlastkhaosangel:
eheh its okay :hug: ^^ *wispers* i kwnoy uo didnt but tis okay no oen else knows

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"A good artist copies, but a great artist steals..."
:iconnmbc-lvr:
I must say...i love it...tis true. and therefore...I shall :+fav: it :aww:

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~Verbinden Sie mich in der Hölle.~
:iconsuneluvsbeastie:
fu fu fu, I luff you!! I shall go read some of yours!!!

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Tell her you're searching for her soul. :3
:iconnmbc-lvr:
me too! yay, I like it when people read my stuff..makes me feel special :aww:

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~Verbinden Sie mich in der Hölle.~

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